Dragonblade

[Calvin "Freckle" McMurray]

Your character's full name: Dragonbalde Wilser
Age: 4 seasons
Species: Hare
Gender: Male
Allegiance: Good
Appearance:

Dragonblade is a tawny colored hare with hazel eyes. He looks more weak than other hares due to a different metabolism, but is fitter than the average hare. He wears studded leather armor to take any enemy arrows.

Belongings:

Studded leather Armor, a long bow, and a greatsword

Job or Position:

Commando

Personality:

More battle-hardened than most due to his love's dissaperance in combat. He tends to keep to himself, but when talking will not shut up. With others not his kind he generally stays silent to not attract attention to himself. This normally gets him no where and he ends up chatterboxing. His one true goal is to find his love.

History and Background Information:

Born in Salamanstron, dragon was traied by the badger lord himself becuase he tried to fight the lord as a Dibbun. This training let him get though most confrontations in his path till he met his love. His love's name is Flowerpaw, a brown hare. He loves her for her personality and her care for him. He cared so much about her he almost commited suicide when she turned up missing. he is a member of the long patrol to find her.

Any other details:

[Aalai]

1. Lots of grammar mistakes, its weaker, not more weak.
2.I want at least two more lines to personality.
3.Describe his love a bit in history, and add 3 or so lines.

[Aalai]

Approved.