Atu

[Exia]

Your character's full name: Atu Brightstar
Age: 17
Species: Fox
Gender: Male
Allegiance: Neutral
Appearance:

Atu has orange and white fur, black eyes, and black paws. He wears a red tunic and carries a gold charm that used to belong to his family around his neck. One of his main foibles is that he puts an emphasis on dental hygene. This is because he knows that teeth are a common "weapon" in unarmed combat.

Belongings:

A charm around his neck (to remind him of his family), a broadsword and shield, as well as a bow.

Job or Position:

He's a mercenary. But he doesn't take on jobs for the cause of evil. He mainly acts to defend whoever hires him against marauders and bandits, though he also sometimes fights as a conventional soldier.

Personality:

He is generally somewhat angry, but can be cheerful and nice around the people close to him. He especially doesn't like foxes who believe in the fortune teller/healer traditions of the foxes, since that (in Atu's mind) is what got his family killed. He also will fight very brutally against theives and raiders for the same reason.

History and Background Information:

His family was a group of travelling fortune tellers and paw readers, but at one point as they started to become more sucessful a weasel and a rat theives raided his family's encampment. They killed his entire family, and in rage he killed both of them with a dagger the rat had set down. Since then he determined that strenght was the only thing that mattered in this world, and he would become strong to protect the things that he cared about. He trained with various mercenairy groups for a time, until he believed he was strong enough to start working on his own.

Any other details:

Family:
Mother (deceased)
Father (deceased)
Younger brother Barrus (deceased)

[Bark Snowfur]

Add another good sentence to the personality and the appearance.

[jack]

I would add to his appearance and personality a little. Otherwise I think it is great.

[Calvin "Freckle" McMurray]

i agree with both, but shouldnt your alligence be neutral?
I mean, you are a merc.

[jack]

That is a good point.

[Exia]

I thought about that too, but I figured the allignment would be good if he only took on jobs that were good. You guys are right on the personality/appearance thing. if you still feel that I need to change the allignment, that's cool; I'm still kinda on the fence about that one myself.

[jack]

I would change it if I were you.

[Calvin "Freckle" McMurray]

ditto.

[Exia]

How's it look now?

[jack]

GOOD

[Exia]

Now I just need Pisgah-Bark or someone similar to approve it.

[Calvin "Freckle" McMurray]

good luck with that...

[Aalai]

Approved--and please guys nly staff can comment on profiles.

[Exia]

Sorry. I did not know that (I know I can comment on my own character, but I commented on the Kippo page)