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Flitch
Nov 11, 2007 21:06:08 GMT -5
Post by jack on Nov 11, 2007 21:06:08 GMT -5
Your character's full name: Flitch E. Longshot Age: 40 Species: vole Gender: Male Allegiance: Evil Appearance: Flitch is a small slender vole. He is dark brown. He wears a black robe with a hood. And a pure black belt. He also has black boots. His eyes are black too. Some say he is death. His boots have a tiny bit of silver on them. His hood also has red and gold on it. Belongings: Flitch carries a small crossbow, 2 throwing knives, dagger, and a long bow. Job or Position: Shadow warrior of Sampetra and SPY Personality: Flitch is very sly and kind. He is kind to all the slaves unless his master tells him not to be. He also is very sly. Flitch sometimes wants to free slaves but he will not since his master does not like it. He will not even take orders from anyone except Teague or his bodyguards. History and Background Information: Flitch was born into the mossflower woods. He grew up near redwall abbey. When he was 10 he moved to redwall. At redwall he got angry at a little dibbun and started hitting it. Because of this he was punished when it happened he was banished. But after time he was forgotten until no one remembered him. Now he is a common visitor of redwall. But in truth he is working for the leader of Sampetra Emperor Teague Blueeyes the Assassin. Teague did not kill him for when Teague looked into his eyes he saw evil. Any other details: WHY CANT I REPLY?
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Aalai
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Flitch
Nov 11, 2007 21:12:52 GMT -5
Post by Aalai on Nov 11, 2007 21:12:52 GMT -5
Rejected.
Personality's length needs to be at least tripled. Appearence's length needs to be doubled, and can you expand on the history, how did he end up with Teague? Why didn't Teague just kill him?
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Aalai
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Flitch
Nov 11, 2007 21:27:18 GMT -5
Post by Aalai on Nov 11, 2007 21:27:18 GMT -5
You cannot reply because I turned member reply in the PROFILES boards off.
Approved.
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Flitch
Dec 5, 2007 10:18:57 GMT -5
Post by carabadgermum on Dec 5, 2007 10:18:57 GMT -5
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