Ty Lee(DONE)

[jack]

Your character's full name: Ty Lee Wessel
Age: 16 years old
Species: Weasel
Gender: Female
Allegiance: Neutral
Appearance:

Ty Lee wears a dark blood red cloak, this cloak has a hod that is not very roomy. She wears a belt and a mask when she is assassinating, this mask matches her cloak. She tends to blend in at night. Her eyes are pure black and her fur is a light gray color. Ty Lee also wears a helmet pained to match her cloak.

Belongings:

Ty lee owns quite a lot. She has a long bow. She also carries 2 daggers that are sort of like throwing knives.

Job or Position:

Bounty Hunter(assassin for hire)

Personality:

Ty Lee is like most vermin. She loves roasted meat or fish of any kind. She eats bird and otter a lot. She is someone that is always peppy, she is always like joyful. Although when she is not very joyful she is silent. Ty Lee is someone that is solo. Sometimes she will work with someone else but only one person.

History and Background Information:

Ty Lee was born into a family of good weasels, she was raised in the mossflower outside of redwall abbey. She hated it. After she ran away she was captured by Hector Barbossa, he trained her in the art of assassination. She was good with her two daggers, but he was teaching her that in the dead of night longbows were better. Now she is a top assassin and works with Hector sometimes.

Any other details:

8th character for me

[Tausend Awyth]

Try smoothing out her personality, appearance and history. Instead of:
Ty Lee wears a dark blood red cloak. This cloak has a hood.

Try:
Ty Lee wears a dark, blood-red cloak, a roomy hood hangs down the back of the cloak when it is not covering her head.

[Tausend Awyth]

Accepted.