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Hisorm
Nov 4, 2007 20:39:25 GMT -5
Post by jack on Nov 4, 2007 20:39:25 GMT -5
Your character's full name: Hisorm the Fast Age: 15 years old Species: rat Gender: Male Appearance: Hisorm is a small but fast rat. He is a bit chubby. He has a small silver earing on his right ear. He wears a green robe. He has gray fur. And black eyes. Belongings: A dagger. Job or Position: A guard on riftguard Personality: Hisorm is a very kind rat. He helps anyone who needs help. But he also takes orders. So if he will be punished for helping a goodbeast then he will not do it. He loves to help people but only will not do it if it is an order. History and Background Information: Hisorm was born on a searat ship. He was raised by his mother and father. His father was the captain. He hated the sea rat life. So he ran away two years ago. He ran away in a longboat from the ship. In a small rain storm his ship broke and he ended up on the shore of riftguard. Any other details: Does he have to be a ferret?
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Hisorm
Nov 6, 2007 10:38:41 GMT -5
Post by Gratis Swiftarrow on Nov 6, 2007 10:38:41 GMT -5
Just a few small things that I would like you to change. Firstly his appearance needs bulking out a bit. What colour is his fur for instance. And the other thing is what do you mean about the ferret in the other details section?
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Hisorm
Nov 6, 2007 10:42:01 GMT -5
Post by jack on Nov 6, 2007 10:42:01 GMT -5
At Riftguard it is ferrets always. So does he have to be one to be part of Riftguard? And I changed it. I added fur color and eye color.
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Hisorm
Nov 6, 2007 10:46:10 GMT -5
Post by Gratis Swiftarrow on Nov 6, 2007 10:46:10 GMT -5
Ah i see what you mean. If I can remember correctly the ruling line of Riftguard or the RHOR are all pure white ferrets but the rest of the army can be any other kind of beast. Many of them are in fact rats.
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Hisorm
Nov 6, 2007 10:49:10 GMT -5
Post by carabadgermum on Nov 6, 2007 10:49:10 GMT -5
RATGUARDS. Armed guards serving under the Pure Ferrets of Riftgard. (TS)
an entry in snowfur's encyclopedia
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Hisorm
Nov 6, 2007 10:50:53 GMT -5
Post by jack on Nov 6, 2007 10:50:53 GMT -5
Cool. I have not read triss yet.
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Hisorm
Nov 12, 2007 22:49:06 GMT -5
Post by jack on Nov 12, 2007 22:49:06 GMT -5
Sorry to double post. But two things one. HISORM IS UP FOR ADOPTION. TWO he is a shadow a spy for Sampetra
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